Heres another redo for 'da agent.
The original brief:
"Illustration: Cartoon of a burglar asleep. He should have an empty bottle of cognac in his hand and be behind the sofa in a respectable house. A little boy is peering at him from round the sofa."
Version 1:
Version 2:
(once agin, clicking on the images will reveal a larger and more detailed view)
Thanks to Tonia, Jones, Jen and Robin for your comments, advice and, well ....for.... showing that you CARE!!
(It was of great help!)
* In other news, while walking in town today with The London Girl I imagined eveyone was a zombie. The scary thing was NOT that I'm a 30 year old man acting like a zombie in public, but that it took very little imagination to believe the people around me WERE zombies!
4 comments:
What those two said!
COS I CARE.
Thanks guys! I've taken your advice and changed the speech balloon and added spilt alcohol!!
I sent both pictures off to the agent and he responded almost immediatly in the positive!
Although he did have one crit, and that was with the Gorrila piece. He said I could add some NY elements to make it more readily recognisable as New York.
JONES- You were RIGHT, by jove!!
And this is different HOW??
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